Question

Plss help me

Change the short poem below to a poem with narrative elements. Then describe the changes you made in 2-3 sentences, as well as how they change the poem to a more narrative form.

sometimes I lie awake
at night
wonder
stars
sheep aren’t working
clock ticks
until the sun hits my face

Answer 1

Sometimes I lie awake at night

wonder, stars, sheep arent working.

clock ticks until the sun hits my face.

Step-by-step explanation:

Answer 2

Often, I lie awake at night
At night, I ponder
I lay awake and gaze upon the stars
Counting sheep does not help me fall asleep
The clock ticks, but I lie awake
Until the rays of the morning sun hit my face

I changed this poem by adding more detail to the original lines. Since I did this, you can understand what is going on in the poem better.