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You will revise and resubmit the introduction and body of your narrative by adding at least five temporal words or phrases.

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Revise your narrative by adding at least five temporal words and phrases.
Place a (T) by each temporal word or phrase you added.
Save your work to your computer or drive.
Submit your work (including both your introduction and body) in 03.07 Transition Time.
the narritive name is Grounded

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gether!" Mr. Jacks said while the last girl was trespassing the force shield with Kate´s pocket mirror. Astonished, they looked at each other as if they did not believe they had escaped. The group walked towards the city that was deserted and dark. The silence was deafening; only the moon illuminated their path. Meanwhile (T), the force fields had multiplied and the inhabitants were trapped or missing."Mr. Jacks, my family is in Baltimore, and I need to find them," Kate said. "You'd better find a safe place and wait there"."No way!" Mr. Jacks answered. "You saved our lives and now we will help you find your family. Let´s go to Baltimore together".Luckily, they found an abandoned van that they could start up. Mr. Jacks decided to take the old route to Baltimore instead of the highway to escape from the force field. After almost two hours, they arrived in Baltimore where the force fields had also affected the desolated city

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