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Determine what is wrong with the Language in each message, and rewrite using more appropriate language

1. A memo to staff: “employees cannot take more than 45 minutes for lunch.”

2. A letter to an applicant: “We don’t think you are the best candidate for the job. We have selected someone else, but you can apply for other jobs.”

3. An email to a coworker: “I can’t finish that chart cuz I gotta leave early to go to the Dentist.”

Determine what is wrong with the Language in each message, and rewrite using more-example-1
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