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Read the run-on sentence.

I turned around to see where the snow might end, it was everywhere.

Which revision is correct?

I turned around to see where the snow might end it was everywhere.
I turned around to see where the snow might end and it was everywhere.
I turned around. To see where the snow might end, it was everywhere.
I turned around to see where the snow might end, and it was everywhere.

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I turned around to see where the snow might end, and it was everywhere.
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