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How can you revise this paragraph to expand the variety of sentence patterns? My home is in New Jersey where I grew up. My parents along with my siblings, moved away long ago. My nearest neighbors are a mile away; my life can be lonely

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I have resided in New Jersey for most of my life, there are many memories in my childhood home. My parents took my siblings and i to move somewhere new a long time ago. The closest form of life is a mile away, my neighbors. Having nobody around, my life can truly be lonely.

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