Question

Read the sentence.

Many people watched the sunset.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

Several people had gathered to observe the pretty sunset that evening.
Yesterday evening, the colorful sunset was seen by a large group of people.
At sunset, the crowd watched the sky fill with shimmering bands of amber and gold.
At evening, many people viewed the beautiful sunset and enjoyed its lovely colors.

Answer 1

Those are both very good maybe you can try something like this:

At that moment it seemed everyone stood watching the line where heaven touched the earth. Their wide eyes witnessed the resounding glowing collision. Sparks lit the sky and blood poured, as the glory of paradise descended further behind the seam of the world. People looked back to the line, only a few bright streaks remained to signal heaven’s passing. The sun had set.