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Ness loves her kitten.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

Ness feels a lot of love for her pet kitten because she thinks it’s nice.
Ness gently rubs her cheek against the soft, fluffy fur of her tiny kitten.
Ness has a tiny kitten that she really loves a lot because it is so cute.
Ness puts her cheek against her kitten’s fur to show how she feels.

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Answer:

the second option is correct

Step-by-step explanation:

Ness gently rubs her cheek against the soft, fluffy fur of her tiny kitten

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Ness feels a lot of love for her pet kitten because she thinks it’s nice
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