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Dylan wrote the following sentence for his research paper on giraffes. The wide savannah is roamed by tall, graceful giraffes. His teacher told him to revise this sentence so that it is more appropriate
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Dylan wrote the following sentence for his research paper on giraffes.

The wide savannah is roamed by tall, graceful giraffes.

His teacher told him to revise this sentence so that it is more appropriate for formal writing.
Don't forget to explain how to revise the sentence.

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The open Savannah is traveled by tall, graceful giraffes.

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The tall, graceful giraffes roamed freely in the open Savannah.
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