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Can someone please give me some help with starting this college application essay? I can never think of how to begin it. Its on what life experiences and struggles I've been through, I just need a good first sentence or two

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Life is a tricky aspect that took me years of thought. I have experienced loss of some beloved people in my life, mental stress, peer pressure, discrimination, and more. Even though I went through tough times, I learned something important. The best way for me to handle all these troubles is for me to ease other peoples trouble. That is why I am applying to this college. I want to become someone who will be respected after i am gone. I want to be a person who is known as a compassionate leader, who was able to solve some of the worlds biggest problems. A person who is associated with remarcable character.

By Rayyan Naik (a Muslim)

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