Question

Amber’s paper on the Civil War has strong ideas, but they do not flow logically. How should she revise her paper?

She should restructure the paragraphs to change the sequence.
She should adjust the choice of words to make the tone more formal.
She should add stronger details and more precise, colorful language.
She should correct any mistakes in spelling or grammar.

Answer 1

A

this is the answer on edge

Answer 2

a

she should reconstruct the paragraphs to change the sequence.

Step-by-step explanation:

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