Hi, you've asked an incomplete question. However, I inferred you want the sentence to be written using correct grammar.
Step-by-step explanation:
Some of the wrongly used words in the sentence that would be replaced are;
- "Her" ⇔ him
- "her child" ⇔ his child
Thus, the sentence could better read;
"They are in the cemetery visiting his wife and telling his child the great sacrifice and choice that people get through".