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Our differences can help us explore and understand more of the world and what it means to be human.

A Personal Essay is a short work of nonfiction in which the writer expresses an idea or opinion, or provides an insight based on personal experiences. For an example of a well-written Personal Essay you can use as a Mentor Text, review the essay "Unusual Normality."

Write a personal essay over a topic of your choosing.

An effective Personal Essay:

• begins with an introduction that catches readers' attention and presents the topic of the essay.

• is focused on an event from your own life or on something you've noticed in the world around you.

• includes details and uses devices such as dialogue to make the event or experience vivid.

• uses appropriate register (level of formality), vocabulary, tone, and voice.

• uses transitions to connect related ideas.

• ends by sharing insights about the topic.

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The most complicated period of life for me was the transition from adolescence to adulthood. It is difficult to start living life with the seriousness required when there is still no emotional preparation for it. When I turned twenty, I realized that I would have to take on greater responsibilities than just going to school and meeting with my friends. The pressure to choose a college and an ideal profession were points that substantially impacted my emotions, and caused me anxiety and difficulty in dealing with the challenges that I would have to face. I can say that it was not an easy period, it is difficult for you to decide something that will have a direct bearing on your future, there is often no possibility of a dialogue with young people to help with their doubts and insecurities, it is only a request that the young person decide about your life, without often having a concrete emotional intelligence to do so. I always wanted to study fashion, it was something that since my childhood I showed interest in, I made drawings of clothes in the notebook and imagined what my collections of haute couture dresses would be like. But unfortunately, life takes us to different paths of the vocation that we believe we have, often based on the lack of opportunities to pay for a college and live alone in another city. Finally, I chose to go to administration school and it was a good choice within what I could do, since management gave me the tools necessary to build a successful business that could help me build a fashion-oriented company in the future.

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The most complicated period of life for me was the transition from adolescence to adulthood. It is difficult to start living life with the seriousness required when there is still no emotional preparation for it.

When I turned twenty, I realized that I would have to take on greater responsibilities than just going to school and meeting with my friends. The pressure to choose a college and an ideal profession were points that substantially impacted my emotions, and caused me anxiety and difficulty in dealing with the challenges that I would have to face.

I can say that it was not an easy period, it is difficult for you to decide something that will have a direct bearing on your future, there is often no possibility of a dialogue with young people to help with their doubts and insecurities, it is only a request that the young person decide about your life, without often having a concrete emotional intelligence to do so.

I always wanted to study fashion, it was something that since my childhood I showed interest, I made drawings of clothes in the notebook and imagined what my collections of haute couture dresses would be like. But unfortunately life takes us to different paths of the vocation that we believe we have, often based on the lack of opportunities to pay for a college and live alone in another city.

Finally, I chose to go to administration school and it was a good choice within what I could do, since management gave me the tools necessary to build a successful business that could help me build a fashion-oriented company in the future. .

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