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Where should there be a paragraph break in the following text?

“Please Dad you have to let me go see the show. No Such Noise is my favorite band and this is the first time that they are coming to Montana. (1.) If I don’t go I may never see them. (2.) And it is not like I would be going alone. Shawn and Brittney will be with me. We will be super careful. Please Dad.” (3.) Carly begged. (4.) “No,” was his only reply.

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Paragraph break likely would be at 4 because a new character is starting a line of dialogue
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