Question

Constructive criticism please i wrote this (read to the tune of eyes blue like the atlantic by sista prod)

this is called 'her'
blue eyes tiny waist black hair/you talk about her, i know i cant compare
eyes blue filled with enchanment/and she took u down like the titanic
you walk in and my heart skips a beat/then i walk in i know i cant compete
eyes blue filled with enchantment/and she took u down like the titanic

Answer 1

It really fits with the beat. It is really good :)

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