Question

Hi can anyone who is native english speaker check if this is right please?Tell me if i should change anything

In the feature article "Island of goats and dreams",the author shares with us the heart-warming act of the locals in Tilos,a small Greek island,with the population of no more than 500, who welcomed and opened their hearts towards the refugees who fled their country for a better life.The refugees there are being integrated into Greek society,the adults are being hired,kids are getting education,but the most important,they are happy and live in humane conditions.
Tilos should be an example to other countries who should do the same thing to help and solve the refugee crisis
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Answer 1

Step-by-step explanation:

• you can put featured instead of feature
• put put goats as a capital g
• make make a space between the coma and the word
• also also try to make your sentences shorter