Answer:
here are my suggestions: (answer in explanation)
Step-by-step explanation:
If you have any native English-speaking friends or acquaintances, it might be helpful to ask them to read it.
You can also view it with a program like Grammarly, I know that is helpful for a lot of people (including native English speakers)
You can also follow a few main ideas that standard English has a pattern of:
- not using too many contractions (like you're, they'd)
- not using slang (like y'all)
- complete/full sentences
- usually longer words and sentences
- think of how you would speak to a government official (act like your argument is formal, and is being told to someone with the power to change something)
- fewer abbreviations (you probably shouldn't use ASAP or lol in your argument)
- check for correct spelling