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I NEED MORE HELP IT DUE AT 11:59pm I SUCK AT ENGLISH

Improve the following sentences by adding descriptive words and pronouns:
The Jordan family went mall. The Jordan family made purchases. The Jordan family
went home.

User Msalman
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Answer:

correct me if i'm wrong, but i believe you could say:

When the Jordan family went to the mall, they purchased some items. After that, they went home.

Step-by-step explanation:

please feel free to correct me or not use my answer. Im not very good at english either, but i thought i could help on this one. <3

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