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Answer:

The first one needs a period instead of the exclamation point. There isn't an exclamation coming from the sentence, so it doesn't need one to end it.

The second one should should add a comma after fireplace and after dinner.

The reason for the second one is that it is listing different items, so it needs commas.

I hope this helps!

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Answer:

The first sentence just needs a period. Although, the second sentence is what is wrong here, this is how it should be written, "We sat by the fireplace, ate dinner, and made smores." Because you can't just jam a bunch of words together and hope it makes a sentence, a sentence needs to make sense so the readers and understand what you're writing.

Step-by-step explanation:

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