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Can anyone tell me if there’s any grammar mistakes??

Can anyone tell me if there’s any grammar mistakes??-example-1

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Answer:

In the line where it says show respect for others

This is the correct grammar: Show respect for others, Also

Its not a big thing but just wanted to point that out also I think it looks great

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User Miiite
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In my opinion there isn’t, but maybe change warm to warmth in the first paragraph?
User Taylor Lopez
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