Question

Can you tell me if you like this poem because im not really sure if i like it.

It is called SEA

Pay attention to the ocean,
the ocean is the most atlantic large indefinite amount of all.
Does the ocean make you shiver?
does it?

I cannot help but stop and look at the sandy seashore.
Does the seashore make you shiver?
does it?

Navy is royal state.
royal state is navy.
Now hirsute is just the thing,
To get me wondering if the navy is flocculent.

The lake that's really zany,
Above all others is the pond.
Never forget the fool and clownish pond.


Can you also give me hints to make it better

Answer 1

I like it a lot it very soothing and nice to read:)

Answer 2

its like i sea what your saying,it it makes me very happy yet sad id say more practice and try to read more poems and see what style fits you such as sad or happy or kid type of stuff but its lovely

whale my times up bai baii !~