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Please help me!!!!!!!!

Please help me!!!!!!!!-example-1
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Its good but you forgot to capitalize W on when, from the introduction. Make sure when writing an essay it has an hook, body paragraph, and conclusion. :)
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You are doing great!

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You are doing great because you have words on your paper. That is progress. Keep your head up! Remember, school is not everything! Don't stress :)

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