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Last weekend was actually pretty fun, Well on Thursday i was on my bed all day watching christmas movies and making cookies

with my mom, Friday i practically did the same thing instead i didn't bake cookies and watched the same movies, Saturday i did do
something different i went to my grandma's house to help her since she is sick and then my grandpa asked me if i wanted to go
ride my four wheeler (ATV) and of course i said yes since im always in my house, So then we went to my friends house to ride
my four wheeler and luckily my cousin came with me, because i would've been so bored, Then we had to finish so we took our
four wheelers and put them in like a little house and went home. When we got home my aunt had to go pick up some kids and my
cousin couldn't stay home by herself so i took her to my house and unfortunately she broke my bed but i forgave her, Then we
finished our day by going to sleep, Then sunday i was watching movies, but when it was like 4:00 pm me and my whole family
went to Golden Corral, because it was my grandma and grandpa's 40th anniversary and we had a great time, we were gonna go to
a Skyliner which is a little cube at Disney where you go on and see the whole Disney but we couldn't, because my grandma was
sick and scared of heights so we just went home and i watched a few video's of James Charles and prayed then went to sleep.
How can fix this paragraph

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Answer:

captitalize all I’s that stand alone. You have a lot of long sentences to try to Add some periods instead of commas.

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