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The kids climbed out of the car, stretching and yawning. They could smell the donuts before the doors to the bakery
opened, and each inhaled deeply and smiled. When they entered the bakery, it was just as their mom had described.
The counter gleamed, and a row of swiveling stools beckoned them. The shop's offerings were on display behind glass
doors.
Which concluding sentence best reflects the writer's voice?
O The kids' mom had grown up in this town, and she was excited to show them her favorite shop.
O The owner of the shop greeted their mom by name, asking her if she would be in town for long.
O Rows of pastries glistened with fresh frosting, and the smell of dough wafted through the air.
O The donuts had been made from a family recipe that emphasized good taste over nutrition