Question

Heres another edit of my song (sad boi hours) what yall think

Answer 1

I think its great. But make a happy song, not a depressing one.

Answer 2

I'm a music producer. So far it's promising, you get to present what you want to present. More on the execution of the song. The song presentation and the lyrics should collorate with one another.

Cheers dude, and good luck with your song