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could somebody please give me constructive feedback on my essay and how to make it better? it’s a day overdue but I’m really anxious because I’m horrible at structuring and writing :) [linked pdf]

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Could you post it on Padlet? I would love to read it
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Answer: bababoey

Explanation: bababoey

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