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Finally, I'd like to say that everyone in the sixth grade thinks that we need more recess time. It's not fair that the
younger students get more time on the playground.
In closing, recess allows kids to have fun with their friends and move their bodies. If kids do not have recess, they
will not sit still in class and focus on their work. That's what I think.
So those are the reasons I think this is an important issue. If parents and teachers want kids to do well in school,
they should listen to my advice.
To summarize, exercise and fresh air are very important for healthy children. One way to provide more exercise and
fresh air at school is to provide extra recess. More time outside ensures healthier students.