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What transition would improve readability and flow in the following passage?

Hunting is a sport that upsets many people. It is often considered to be cruel by those who love animals._____,even Native Americans have been hunting for years and have guidelines that both honor and protect animals.

A. In addition

B. However

C. Also

D. Furthermore​

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I’m thinking however, choice B.

They are saying it is cruel, but then contradicting by saying there are ways they honor animals.

This is an appropriate spot to use however.

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