Question

This one is my final draft I am not sure how much the word count is supposed to be at but it should be at least somewhere around the 200s/300 word counting if there are any errors or wording that isnt related to the prompt I will get the points back.

"The Renaissance was a time of great innovation, change, and achievement in Europe. Choose an influential person from the Renaissance, and write an informative biographical essay about him or her. Provide an overview of this person’s life, and explain their influence on history"

Answer 1

Famously known Leonardo Davinci has
helped develop culture and history in art.
His intricate artwork usually conveys a
meaning/story of some sort. While he is
famous for his world-class artwork, there
was more to him.
Born by the name,
"Leonardo di ser Piero da
Vinci", meaning Leonardo, son of ser Piero
from Vinci, Leonardo enrolled in an
apprenticeship at the young age of 14 to
Andrea del Verrocchio, which enhanced and
refined his are skills greatly. But while he
was most famously known for being an
artist, Leonardo also contributed to the
science and architecture industries.
Davinci was influenced by his surroundings
and the events happening in the
renaissance times, his artistic abilities were
only enhanced by his natural environment.
His travel across the world also influenced
his professions, Davinci traveled for
entertainment and inspiration for artwork
such as the very well-known "Mona Lisa"
or
his final painting,
"Saint John the Baptist"
Having had so many different experiences,
he'd painted great representations of the
times and painted stories to areat

Answer 2

Famously known Leonardo Davinci has helped develop culture and history in art. His intricate artwork usually conveys a meaning/story of some sort. While he is famous for his world-class artwork, there was more to him.

Born by the name, "Leonardo di ser Piero da Vinci", meaning Leonardo, son of ser Piero from Vinci, Leonardo enrolled in an apprenticeship at the young age of 14 to Andrea del Verrocchio, which enhanced and refined his are skills greatly. But while he was most famously known for being an artist, Leonardo also contributed to the science and architecture industries.

Davinci was influenced by his surroundings and the events happening in the renaissance times, his artistic abilities were only enhanced by his natural environment.

His travel across the world also influenced his professions, Davinci traveled for entertainment and inspiration for artwork such as the very well-known "Mona Lisa" or his final painting, "Saint John the Baptist". Having had so many different experiences, he'd painted great representations of the times and painted stories to great comprehension,

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