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What is the most significant problem related to sentence variation in the excerpt below?

The day was sunny. The temperature was high, though the clouds made it feel more cool. The wind blew steadily from the east. The kids
gathered their picnic things and went outside for lunch. The teacher called them in when the wind picked up to dangerous levels. The forecast
hadn't mentioned a tornado!
A.
short sentences
OB.
no variety in sentence beginnings
C.
use of clauses
OD. none of the above

User Hamy
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Answer:

C. Use of clauses

Step-by-step explanation:

User Chefes
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Answer: B- no variety in sentence beginnings

Explanation: I got it right on the test/Plato =)

User Harish Talanki
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