Question

Which sentence needs revision to make its meaning clear?

A
Rounding the bend, the two racers appeared tied for first place.

B
On her way home, Alana found the man’s broken bicycle.

C
We saw a beautiful sunset having a picnic on the hillside.

D
We handed water in large cups to the tired firefighters.

Answer 1

Answer: C

Explanation: It sounds like the sunset is having a picnic, even though what it really means, is that we saw a sunset while having a picnic.