Question

A text box with entry "My duties included reviewing purchasing trends, analyzing customer data, and preparing annual trend reports." What changes should be made to the above statement, located within a resume, to make it a more effective and powerful sounding qualification?

Answer 1

Sample response:

The statement should not start with the word “my”. The qualification is not starting with a strong action verb. Example: Conducted extensive purchasing research; analyzed, diagrammed, and reported results of customer data; and wrote annual trend reports

Step-by-step explanation:

Did the lesson.

Answer 2

text structure changes

Step-by-step explanation:

What this entails is that the text is adjusted using words that show more confidence, and clarity of expression to the reader.

For example, the overall structure of the statement could be more effective and a powerful sounding qualification;

Because of my intense commitment to work, I was very successful in carrying out these responsiblities,

• reviewing of purchasing trends,
• analysis of client data,
• prepared annual trend reports.