Question

I updated the poem..

The time has come
Unbeknownst to them
What a wonderful secret
Announced again.
A baggage that’s carried
Again and again
A bountiful burden
Since i was 10
The baggage will drop
I don't know when
But i pray i don't lose a friend
thoughts?

Answer 1

I like your poem alot

Step-by-step explanation:

its deep and i can really understand it

Answer 2

This is a really nice poem. You definitely done a really good job. Better than I could ever do. Keep up the great work!

Have a wonderful day;)