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I updated the poem.. The time has come Unbeknownst to them What a wonderful secret Announced again. A baggage that’s carried Again and again A bountiful burden Since i was 10 The baggage will drop I don't
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I updated the poem..

The time has come
Unbeknownst to them
What a wonderful secret
Announced again.
A baggage that’s carried
Again and again
A bountiful burden
Since i was 10
The baggage will drop
I don't know when
But i pray i don't lose a friend
thoughts?

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I like your poem alot

Step-by-step explanation:

its deep and i can really understand it

User Adi Darachi
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This is a really nice poem. You definitely done a really good job. Better than I could ever do. Keep up the great work!

Have a wonderful day;)
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