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The Mnemiopsis jellyfish are eating all the larva and fish eggs so fishermen can’t make any money fishing for fish. Fishermen make around a million dollars according to the article “Jellyfish Take Over”, but when the jellyfish eat the larva or the fish eggs fishermen lose that money. Also, the jellyfish are making it where fishermen that fish for food have no food for their family. The fishermen lose their food for their family because some people eat the fish instead of selling it for money so they can have their own food fresh. One can solve this problem by putting Bereo jellyfish in the ocean so people can have food and can sell the fish for money.

Answer 1

The Mnemiopsis jellyfish are eating all the larva and fish eggs so fishermen can’t make any money fishing for fish. Fishermen generally earn around an average of $1,000,000 per (year or month or overall?) according to the article “Jellyfish Take Over". However, when the jellyfish eat the larva or the fish eggs fishermen lose that money. This causes the fishermen to earn less money to put food on the table. This can also occur when people illegally fish and eat the fish and eggs themselves.This puts the desired fish species (plural) in double jeopardy. The fishermen will also continue to lose their food for their family when people eat the fish instead of selling it for money so they can have their own food fresh. One way to solve this problem would be to breed more Bereo jellyfish in captivity to release into the ocean so people can have more opportunities to catch food and earn a profit.

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Answer 2

All the larvae and fish eggs are eaten by the Mnemiopsis jellyfish, so fishermen do not make any money fishing for fish. According to the article "Jellyfish Take Over," fishermen make about a million dollars, but when the jellyfish eat the larva or fish eggs, fishermen lose that money. It is also done by the jellyfish where fishermen who fish for food have no food for their kin. For their families, the fishermen lose their food because some people eat the fish instead of selling it for cash, so they can get their own fresh food. By placing Bereo jellyfish in the ocean, one can solve this problem so that people can have food and can sell the fish for money.