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Please read my story and LMK what you think

this is the recent update of it and there are more pages before it on my recent question would love to hear what u have to say ...
( To read from the beginning will be on my other questions just go to my profile )

Please read my story and LMK what you think this is the recent update of it and there-example-1
User BigMikeW
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pretty good to me. like how it’s already building tension between jonny and rebecca
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