Question

rate my verse i feel like falling apart i should of known from the start ey , feel like my head is on mars i got no ice but my heart froze... bit im drippin with the misfits all alone with my heart blown ima need a heart loan hey just saying its a slow beat

Answer 1

That's really good I'd give it 20/10.

Step-by-step explanation:

I write songs all the time but my ryhming's a little off lol anyways keep up the good work and in no time you could be standing on a stage!^^