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Consider these sentences: I have a new hobby. I keep track of all the wild birds I spot. Which sentence uses parenthetical elements most effectively to combine the information in the sentences? I have a new hobby, which is keeping track of all the wild birds I spot. I have a (new) hobby, which is keeping track—of all the (wild) birds I spot. I have a new hobby, keeping track—of all the wild birds I spot. I have a new hobby—keeping track—of all the (wild) birds (I spot).

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Answer: I have a new hobby, which is keeping track of all the wild birds I spot.

Explanation: Because "B" just misuses the Parthethess, Hope this was helpful! =)

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