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Can i have some good feed back on the story i am writing for my English Class...? You will be super helpful..!!!

Here a few parts of my story not the full thing but lmk what you think...?
I skipped a part but its just a peek of it ... its not done yet

Can i have some good feed back on the story i am writing for my English Class...? You-example-1
Can i have some good feed back on the story i am writing for my English Class...? You-example-1
Can i have some good feed back on the story i am writing for my English Class...? You-example-2

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Answer:

I really like it, seems cool!

Step-by-step explanation:

good luck!

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