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Rewrite the following sentences or phraseson a separate sheet of paper to make them more direct. more readable, or less wordy. Janet Warren is not only the most honest of all the candidates for senator, she is also the most experienced, with more than 10 years of service in the government; she has the endorsement of all three of the major cities newspapers; she has already proven herself a reliable reputation for her strong moral fiber and sense of ethics.​

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"Janet Warren is an honest and experienced candidate, with 10 years of experience, recognition from three major newspapers, and previous proof of her reliability and morality."

i hope you weren't looking for something too specific, hopefully this helps!

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