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Read the sentence. The hot chocolate was a nice treat today. Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

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✔️The steaming mug of rich hot chocolate was a soothing treat on this snowy day.

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The above option is the best sentence that is descriptive and utilises sensory words.

This sentence gives the details and still maintains the message of the first sentence. Sensory words are actually words that help to describe how we experience things around us. They give us information on things that we see, touch, feel, hear, etc. The sensory words are: "rich, hot, soothing, steaming"

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