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9. What are the possible ways to edit the following run on sentence.

I love to write papers. I would write one every day if I had the time.
NOTE : You can choose more that one answer. *

1.I love to write papers. I would write one every day if I had the time.

2.I love to write papers; I would write one every day if I had the time.

3.I love to write papers, I would write one every day if I had the time.

4.I love to write papers, and I would write one every day if I had the time.

5.Because I love to write papers, I would write one every day if I had the time.

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(original: I love to write papers I would write one everyday if I had the time.)

ANSWER

3. I love to write papers, I would write one every day if I had the time.

AND

1. I love to write papers. I would write one every day if i had the time

WHY?

yes

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Answer:

1. Put a comma after day

2. Delete the (;) and write an exclamation point

3. Like two

4. Like two and three. Delete the (and)

5. Delete (because) and after papers an exclamation point

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