Question

HELP ASAP!!!! how can i add more sensory detail to this part of my essay?

She was old, wrinkly, and her voice was very cackly, like sandpaper. Even though she was old, she attacked the zombie strongly. She vigorously punched, kicked, and slapped the zombie with all of her mighty strength. Although it was a mystery on how she was so strong! SHe then whispered in my ear, “Don’t tell anyone...Ahahaha.” She comfortably invited me into her warm, cozy, ghostly home.

Answer 1

cochie man is the answer

Answer 2

ok I don’t know if it would make sense to put this part instead of what u wrote In ur essay but I’m gonna rewrite it:
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“You could tell she was old of age- between the wrinkles on her face & her low raspy voice, she still somehow found a way to attack the zombie. With the viciousness in her attacks, she defeated the zombie. Even though she defeated the zombie, it’s still a mystery on how she did it. She then came over to me like nothing happened, whispering in my ear she said, “let’s keep this a secret between us.” Her laughing it off, she welcomed me into her delightful, cozy ghostly home.
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