Question

Can someone read over my essay and proof read it, PLEASE? It's a Narrative Extension Writing for the ending of a book, so expect that.

Answer 1

Its is really good! Make sure to have the commas in the right places and when you have quotations, make sure its the write grammar. :)

Good luck!!

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Answer 2

It is amazing great job!

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