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HAHA *Antonio crying in laughter* ''Stop Driving so fast'' said Fernanda ''yes please Stop It were going to end up crashing'' Catalina said to Antonio. He Yelled back '' NO WERE NOT CAN YALL JUST STOP TALKING SO I CAN CONCENTRATE!! '' Well why are you RACING this guy anyways if we do end up crashing all he is going to do Is Leave us here dead'' * '' Oh I'm so scared were going to crash'' Antonio muttered under his breath looking at Catalina in the back seat

'' YO WATCH OUT'' *Screamed Fernando*

*Skrrr* *crash*

( 5 MINUTS LATER )

( Crawling out the flipped Damaged car ) *Screaming & Crying in Terrier* ''HURRY CALL THE POLICE'' Said Catalina ''OK '' ( Yelled the man Across the street while watching Catalina get out the car hurting ) *Typing on phone* ''Hello 911 What's Your're Emergency'' ''YESS WE NEED THE AMBULENCE HERE NOW ON *BEAR CREEK STREET 8564 THERE WAS A HUGE ACCIEDENT '' Ok Sir Please Calm Down The Police and Ambulance Are On Their Way now what happened is there anyone hurt? Asked the Lady. ''YES THERE IS THERE ARE BROKEN PIECES'S OF CAR EVERYWHERE AND THERE ARE TEEN'S IN THERE, AND THERE IS ALSO GIRL THAT IS HURT''. ''Ok'' were you there when the Accident Occurred '' No I wasn't I just came out to take the trash out'' Ok and where are you''? Umm I'm at the Gas Station'' *Police And Ambulance Siren's* ( Rushing Down The Street ) . The Police are here * Hangs up*

*Man Running to the Police Car* ! HELP THERE ARE SOME TEENAGERS IN THAT

CRASHED CAR SITTING ON THE SIDE OF THE ROAD AND A GIRL SHE'S HURT! *Police Hops out the car* ''Ok let me deal with this * Clicks on Flashlight*.

It was below 50 degrees Outside and the Street was frozen

It makes Driving sound like limbs of a tree Crackling.

Have you ever had something happen without Being Planned? Or something not Being Known before it happens. Like a Feeling That you feel like something Bad Is Going To Happen.

''I could feel the pain in my right leg, my Body shaking and trembling while I try to talk to the police scared about what to tell him and how my parent's will react with my behavior and why I was out here this late out with my friend's what am I even going to tell their parent's that their Daughter's and son's died all just because I wanted to sneak out and have fun.

Hello this was a Narrative Process Piece Hope You Enjoy Reading *Tell me if You Need Me To Change Anything

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Answer: no you dont it is perfect :)

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