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"The old me looked beautiful. Skinny and beautiful. Also unhealthy." Please help me grammatically correct this sentence without changing the tone.

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The old me looked beautiful, skinny, and unhealthy.

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the old me was beautiful and skinny, but it was unhealthy.

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