Which short narrative would be the most appropriate style and tone for the personal essay section of a college
application?
O I started volunteering at the hospital a few years ago. It's been fun.
O It feels like I've been chipping in at the hospital for forever and a day. It's been wicked cool.
O I have proffered my time and resources to the invalids for nigh on three years. It has been most diverting.
O Ever since my grandfather had a heart attack three summers ago, I have volunteered my afternoons and weekends
at the local hospital.