Question

Juana is building a new website for her event-planning

business and wants to include some persuasive text that
helps her draw in new clients. Read Juana's draft.
Everyone likes a party, but planning one is hard work!
Why not leave the hard work to us? Picture-Perfect
Parties has experience planning events of all sizes and
can help you make your dream event a reality. Sit back
and leave it all to us. We can plan and manage your
event from start to finish. We also offer partial planning
and day-of coordination for large events. Our clever and
crafty touches will make your party picture perfect!
How can Juana best revise the text to help draw in new
clients?
O by stating her main idea at the beginning of the
paragraph
O by making unsupported claims about her competitors
O by offering a special discount to first-time customers
O by choosing information that is more appropriate to
the topic

Answer 1

by stating her main idea at the beginning of the paragraph

Step-by-step explanation:

This gives the reader the ultimate interest upon reading her advertisement!

In conclusion, she already has the reader's ear ready to be persuaded with her offer. At least that is what I know, I hope it helps!