Question

The scientists were right about the time the algae bloom would take place.

Rewrite this sentence using more precise technical language.

Answer 1

"The biologists were precise on the amount of time the algae bloom would transpire. " This is what I wrote.

Answer 2

The researchers were true regarding the hour the algae bloom would start to transpire.

Step-by-step explanation:

The given sentence is written in ordinary or plain language and conveys the meaning clearly. In order to rewrite it using technical language, the vocabulary needs to specific and specialized so that it communicates the complex information about the particular subject. Thus, the words like 'scientists,' 'right', 'about', 'time', 'take place' have been replaced with more precise and specific words like 'researchers,' 'true,' 'regarding,' 'hour,' 'transpire.'