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1. Please be so kind as to send us the infomation about your charges for rental of the large conference room at your hotel on or about March 30 of this year so that we are able to call you and book the room for an event that will be held sometime in June.

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Please send us an invoice for renting the large conference room at your hotel. We used it on or about March 30 of this year. We intend to hold another event there sometime in June. Please give us a quotation so that we can call you and book the room.

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