Answer:
When critiquing a work of art, you always want to use what is called "The Sandwich Method". The Sandwich Method goes 1) something good about the work. 2) something you would have changed or done differently. 3) something good about the work.
Step-by-step explanation:
I would say the following for the students artwork.
This student's piece of art is very detailed and extremely life-like. However, if I were to have done this work of art, I would have added color to it. I may have also, added some more background. This work of art, overall, is very nice. It is detailed amazingly, and is very life-like and has a lot of texture within it.