Question

Here is a piece of a song i am writing for my sis (she killed herself) i rlly want to finish it but cant

Sometimes i wish that i could fall asleep and not wake up

Curse me cheat me beat me but i'll never make a fuss

Im fighting and tryin to stay alive

In a world that hates me to the point where i've


given up on hoping and praying for a brighter day

tell me you leave all alone that you will stay

by my side forever and always

I feel like i need to breathe and let you in

Being all alone by myself makes me feel like i am falling


And i dont want to lose it again

Tell me that you'll listen



Slowly falling down a steep hill

Im so numb that i cant even feel (pain anymore)

Answer 1

pls don't be sad

condolence

Answer 2

the first ching u can change to "Sometimes I wish I could fall asleep, never to wake up" to make it rhyme a bit more with the second sentence.